美国行程征求意见稿, 求长老指点啊

草拟美国行程, 求各位长老意见
Shanghai → Los Angeles → San Francisco → Los Angeles → Las Vegas → San Diego → Los Angeles → Shanghai

Day 1 San Francisco ( Fisherman's Wharf, Lombard Street, Gilroy Premium Outlets)
Day 2 San Francisco (Golden Gate Bridge, California Academy of Sciences)
Day 3 San Francisco -> Los Angeles (Santa Barbara, Solvang (丹麦村)
Day 4 Los Angeles -> Universal Studios, Palisades Park, Santa Monica 日落
Day 5&6 Los Angeles -> Disneyland , Disneyland Adventure
Day 7 Los Angeles -> Las Vegas Caesars Palace , MGM Grand, New York New York, Luxor Las Vegas
Day 8 Las Vegas (Grand Canyon 一日游)
Day 9 Las Vegas -> San Diego
Day 10 San Diego (Sea World)
Day 11 San Diego (USS Midway) -> Los Angeles (Huntington Library, Art Collections and Botanical Gardens (Japanese Garden, Rose Garden, Jungle Garden)
Day 12 Grauman's Chinese Theatre
Day 13 Los Angeles (Shopping)
Day 14 Back to SH